Sammi D

I really liked this! An intriguing concept, to mix technical speak with a religious idea, but it definitely works. Upon reading what you wrote prior to the poem, I was ...

I like it! The way you describe humanity matches my own thoughts on it -- I especially like the lines "O Humanity / How great you are / How you ...

I like it! Especially the reference to fire in the beginning -- I always find flames so poetic even outside of words. :wink: I feel like I can compare to ...